I over heard a following dialog at the birth day Party, after I told above story
Young: I’m sorry! Old: For what? You didn't do anything wrong. Young: I worry because you get hurt due to my error. You’re always there to correct it. But as you correct my mistakes you are old your are getting tired and you lose a part of your resting time.. Old: That's true. But I don't really mind. That is my function. I am to asset, whenever you do something wrong. Even, everyday get little and weaker then one day I’ll be gone and you'll replace me. So please, stop worrying and brighten your day sharpening your awareness towards your duty.
A serene grandma said to me, “Is not very encourage?
She added,
Parents are like the eraser whereas their children are the pencil. They're always there for their children after their play for cleaning them. Sometimes along the way... we get hurt, and become smaller (older, and eventually pass on). Though children will eventually find spouse), but parents are still content with what they add to children comfort, and will always dislike seeing their precious ones worrying, or have sad feeling.
1 comment:
Hey, I really like the message of this story. A couple notes about grammar: Birthday is one world, not two.
When the Eraser or Elder says:
That's true. But I don't really mind. That is my function. I am to asset, whenever you do something wrong. Even, everyday get little and weaker then one day I’ll be gone and you'll replace me. So please, stop worrying and brighten your day sharpening yourself by doing your duty.
The fifth sentence should be something like: Even though everyday I get littler and weaker, one day I'll be gone and you'll replace me.
Also, the "A serene grandma my said" should be either my serene grandma said or a serene grandma said to me, depending on what you're trying to say.
Again, it's a really cute story.
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