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Sunday, May 15, 2011

Human’s Requests 5 & 6

5 Love me with open arms Open-mind with purity Love me with your heart so I can hear heart beats 6

Love me with your talk, let me hear the message let me bear my old age When I am on the stage

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Nice message even though the last two lines show your language weakness.

let me bear the my age
When I on the stage

Let me bear my age
when I am on the stage.

Still, the first stanza is very very nice.