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I really like the message of this poem. It seems like this poem is trying to redefine the word 'together". The thing I might suggest is adding a noun/subject to the second line. 'I want togetherness', maybe?
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I really like the message of this poem. It seems like this poem is trying to redefine the word 'together". The thing I might suggest is adding a noun/subject to the second line. 'I want togetherness', maybe?
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